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When night falls
you take my hand to walk and talk
with the stars lighting
our path
with the wind
dancing around us
you bring me to warmth
with the peace of your embrace
you hold me like a precious jewel
you touch me like im glass
and hover above me like your a strong tower
you whisper in my ear
like the soft batting of wings of a butterfly
and say
'i love you'
before i melt and cry
with flower petals
whirling with the wind
and grasshoppers clicking their wings
you smile with charm'which makes me melt
and pasionatley pressed your lips against mine
then turn around to say good bye
and i reply
with a short smile
as you pass by
thats so sweet =)
dat was good!
omg that was good
its good
i like it.
this is one of the longest poems i have ever writien (thats a lie) its really mushy