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When night falls

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When night falls

When night falls

you take my hand to walk and talk

with the stars lighting

our path

with the wind

dancing around us

you bring me to warmth

with the peace of your embrace

you hold me like a precious jewel

you touch me like im glass

and hover above me like your a strong tower

 

you whisper in my ear

like the soft batting of wings of a butterfly

and say

'i love you'

before i melt and cry

with flower petals

whirling with the wind

and grasshoppers clicking their wings

you smile with charm'which makes me melt

and pasionatley pressed your lips against mine

then turn around to say good bye

and i reply

with a short smile

as you pass by


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Creator Comments

this is one of the longest poems i have ever writien (thats a lie) its really mushy

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thats so sweet =)

07.06.2008 07:11 PM


dat was good!

05.11.2008 09:54 AM


omg that was good

05.10.2008 06:34 PM


its good

05.09.2008 11:21 AM


i like it.

05.08.2008 10:42 PM


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